It’s not a matter of adjectives, it a matter of relevancy.
Posted on: January 9, 2025 at 12:32:52 CT
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Since there is no relevance to the story, adding those facts gives the impression it does or that you feel it’s important for the reader to know. If they were both overweight and ugly, would you have opened with that and what would that have to do with the story?